I write because my head is full of words
words unspoken
I write because my head is full of dreams
dreams unfulfilled
I write because my head is full of ideas
ideas unexplored
I write because I have a voice
a voice unheard
I write because my head is full of words
words unspoken
I write because my head is full of dreams
dreams unfulfilled
I write because my head is full of ideas
ideas unexplored
I write because I have a voice
a voice unheard
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This is wonderful!
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Great poem. Succinct. Poignant. Balanced. Great to be in class with you again, Dede.
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Saw your post on the Writing101 Commons. Great work. I love the simplicity and powerful ideas you have expressed in so few words. My only feedback is purely aesthetics. Since this is written in a form similar to poetry. I think it would make your words look more appealing if you capitalize each line and add punctuation. For example:
“I write because my head is full of words,
Words unspoken.”
My post is in a similar format. I would love to hear your feedback as well:
https://whistlewhileyouwalk.wordpress.com/2015/09/07/i-write-because/
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Nice. Succinct and poetic. I hope you enjoy the writing course. 🙂
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What a lovely blog page you have made
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Couldn’t agree more!
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